Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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amount of people who choose
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lifestyle and escape changes while some individuals
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that adjustments to
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way of living have only positive aspects. I believe, that both philosophies are worth considering in terms of types of changes.
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with, individuals who prefer stability and avoid taking risks likely think that they do not need
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anything all of their success has achieved. In my opinion,
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of personalities
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not see the ways of development.
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, it is more suitable to predict the future in
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periods of long taxes and vacations,
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it is believed that
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routine may transform into
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one . A
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convenience is that proponents of switching
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can lead to personal growth through summarising various skills.
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, if a person decides to come out
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his or her comfort zone and try disparate things,
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decision will open door to some opportunities.
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, in the comparative world individual who does
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and has a knowledge of working in different spheres
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more power and promotion to get a higher position.
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, those who procrastinate are protected from
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of boredom. To sum up, both sides of the argument have pros.In any case, as far as I can see
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within the same field of work looks consistent.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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