In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In

this

day and age, almost all companies and professions are faced with numerous and various tastes and demands due to globalisation, and

this

has made the competition tighter and more intense than before. As a consequence, businesses should focus more on fresh items and new options

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their outcomes, and introduce them in their

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to have a place in

this

competition.

Although

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issue probably has pros and cons points, it seems to me that it is considered a positive development. On the one hand, nowadays because of

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market

, companies have a large number of consumers from different countries and cultures,

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has not only created dissimilarity

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but

also

created vast diversity in demands.

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,

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globalisation has widened the boundaries of compensation, and businesses must try to stay in

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market

and not

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be eliminated.

For example

, in the past the

market

consisted of several cities or at most one country;

as a result

, business owners need to know about command and local demands and work on them , while nowadays companies need to focus on various tastes and brunch

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new products or options to the

market

due to wide differences and high competition that has arisen.

Additionally

,

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is the most

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way

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illustrate

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the creativity used in their product.

On the other hand

,

business's

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struggle to dominate the

market

and attract more customers make them put more effort

on

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quality

, variety and inventiveness,

therefore

society will benefit more from these things. If a business willing to be successful in

this

market

, it must produce newer and better

quality

products than its competitors and keep its customers satisfied.

Furthermore

,

this

may improve the

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market

and adjust the unemployment rate in

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view of the fact that

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having

quality

,

custome

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customer

satisfaction, inventiveness, and competitive advantage require many specialists and workers.

For instance

, it is obvious that Coca-Cola company has more staff and manager

expert

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than a small local company. In conclusion, globalisation and competitive advantage have made businesses try to

staying

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this

market

by showing creativity in their products and introducing it to consumers

throughout

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advertising, and because they are trying to produce

quality

and

market

prosperity, it seems it is a positive development.