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some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. other universities require students to specialze in one subject. which is better? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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undoubtedly, universities students try to achieve the best result during education , they have to take several courses that can pass and after that can be graduated
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, in my opinion, students are forced to pass the whole course and sometimes it's not necessary to take the classes in many subjects I have many reasons for that
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, stressless of the academic environment is increased when we have different classes and affect our lives
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 when I was a student due to the variety of courses I did not like to go to college sometimes
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 I passed them but decreased contribution rate
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, a high number of studies cause you can't focus on one specialized title. in
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 many studies have shown that to conclude, the basis of my view is based on two reasons that it is written above Students should have enough space-time that can focus on one subject correctly
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