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The charts below show the production of different types of citrus fruit in Brazil, China and USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

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The given data illustrate different types of citrus
fruit
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 production in three different countries. Overall, orange
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account
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 for the majority of citrus
fruit
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 production in Brazil and the USA, whereas China focuses heavily on growing and selling
Tangerines
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. At
first
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 glance, orange totally dominates the producing share when made up 87% of the producing percentage. Two runner-ups are left far behind with
tangerines
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 and lemons accounting for respectively 6% and 5% all. Both grapefruit and other citrus
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 take
an extremely modest amounts
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 at 1% of the cake. We can see quite similar patterns from the chart of the USA, which
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 has the most percentage at 73% belonging to oranges. Lemons at 7%,
tangerines
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 at 3% and other citrus
fruit
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 at 1% are the information
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 almost unidentical with Brazil.
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, grapefruits show a significant difference in the USA with
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% accounting percentage.
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, China is the only anomaly in which
tangerines
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 are the top group with
account
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 for 74% of the cake. Orange fell into
second
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 place but still
account
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 heavily for 18%. Others are quite similar to each other, which again,
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 for just a tiny portion in all at 3% (lemons) , 3% (grapefruit) and 2% (other citrus
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