You and some friends ate a meal at a reataurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter, give details of your visit to the restaurant, explain the reason for the celebration, say what was good about the food and the services.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter with regard to providing feedback about your hotel's foodstuff and service which I and some of my buddies tried. We visited your restaurant
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week to be exact the date was 19th of October, 2022, apart from that, I and my friends visited your hotel for a celebration of a birthday person.
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, from all of my group one of them,
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got a job, so, it was a double party which we enjoyed at your hotel named 'Krishna Luxurious'.
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, the food was extremely delicious that all of my friends thanked me for choosing your place.
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, all of us loved the service of your restaurant's waiter they were so humble as well as very kind in nature. The food we all ate was mind-blowing and anyone cannot forget the foodstuff for a longer period of time. One of my friends told me that he/she
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saw a dream about the food as well. Looking forward to a positive and prompt response. Yours sincerely, Shah Harshil
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