During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to his businessman. In your letter - remind him when and where you met - tell him what kind of job you are interested in - say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear
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Patel, I hope
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letter finds you well. It was a pleasure chatting with you during our flight from Mumbai to Boston
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Saturday. I am really impressed by the project that you are working on with a brand new cuisine for your restaurants. I am writing
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letter to express my interest towards working as a chef in your Boston-based restaurant. I am looking for a job that requires innovating new
receipes
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recipes
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taste similar to its origin. I am
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interested in exploring new opportunities in the baking section
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in Italian cuisine. Along with it, I have a lot to bring to the table as I have been exploring new ideas for different
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recipes
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a combination of multiple cuisines. I have attached my portfolio with
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letter
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includes
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of dishes I have developed recently.
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, I am confident that my ambitions and customer-oriented personality will well align with your business values. Please let me know if you are interested in my candidature for the position of
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chef. I would like to schedule a meeting to discuss my qualities with you. Yours sincerely, Yatharth
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chain of restaurants
  • potential job opportunity
  • relevant experience
  • managerial role
  • customer service
  • qualifications
  • certifications
  • unique skills
  • eagerness
  • admiration
  • resume
  • references
  • face-to-face meeting
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