The pie charts below show the amount of electricity generated by energy source in Scotland for 20 years ago and last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The data illustrates the amount of electricity generated by

energy

sources in Scotland 20 years ago and

last

year. Overall, the amount of electricity in the

last

year shows a quite similar pattern to the 20-year-ago in most of the

energy

sources and the types of

energy

remained the same throughout that 20 years

period

. At

first

glance, the leading

energy

types (coal, gas, nuclear) accounted respectively 41.4%, 22.3%, and 19.6%, almost a

third

-quarter of the total amount. Followed by Hydro, which was significantly higher than the rest, but constituted just only 8.7% of the total electricity . Other renewables (2.8%), oil (2.1%), and hydro-pumped storage (3.1%) were the

energy

sources generating the least

energy

for Scotland in that

period

On the other hand

, interestingly, coal , gas, and nuclear still remained dominant in the

last

year

period

with respectively 32.7%, 21.7% and 26.4%. Coal showed a significant drop whereas nuclear rose sharply and gas was almost identical throughout the 20-year

period

Furthermore

, it was other renewables and oil ,

however

, that showed the highest rate of growth, almost doubling in twenty years to 5.1% and 4.0%, respectively. Scotland's Hydro natural flow merely dropped to 7.9% in 2020.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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