You have just an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper in your letter say which points in the article you about explain ways in which year Town Centre is different from most other towns centres offer to give a guided tour of your Town Centre to the writer of the article

Dear sir/madam, I came across your article on The Daily News about the
town
centres across the
country
looking very similar to each other. I live in the small
town
of Santa Cruz and personally, I do not agree with
this
point of view completely. Please, allow me to explain. After going through the article multiple times I can definitely see your point about certain similarities between
town
centres around the
country
for example
, having a huge bell in the middle of the
town
square and the surrounding building are all built and used for administrative purposes by the government.
However
, the similarities end there, on a very high level only. I have been working as a tour guide for around 15 years now and I can share some interesting details and differences.
For example
, our bell displays a unique style of carving, depicting the entire history of the
town
which is one of a kind in the
country
.
Furthermore
, the government offices are
also
a
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historic monuments because they were built at the time of war to serve as a shelter in critical times. There are many distinct differences between our
town
centre compare to the
country
's. I would like to invite you for a visit to the Santa Cruz
town
centre and I will personally take you
through
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a tour of the
town
square and
additionally
give you an overview of the architecture and heritage of our city. Yours sincerely,
Samvid
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David
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