You have just an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper in your letter say which points in the article you about explain ways in which year Town Centre is different from most other towns centres offer to give a guided tour of your Town Centre to the writer of the article

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Dear sir/madam, I came across your article on The Daily News about the

town

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centres across the

country

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looking very similar to each other. I live in the small

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of Santa Cruz and personally, I do not agree with

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point of view completely. Please, allow me to explain. After going through the article multiple times I can definitely see your point about certain similarities between

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centres around the

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for example

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, having a huge bell in the middle of the

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square and the surrounding building are all built and used for administrative purposes by the government.

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, the similarities end there, on a very high level only. I have been working as a tour guide for around 15 years now and I can share some interesting details and differences.

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, our bell displays a unique style of carving, depicting the entire history of the

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which is one of a kind in the

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, the government offices are

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historic monuments because they were built at the time of war to serve as a shelter in critical times. There are many distinct differences between our

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centre compare to the

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's. I would like to invite you for a visit to the Santa Cruz

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centre and I will personally take you

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a tour of the

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square and

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give you an overview of the architecture and heritage of our city. Yours sincerely,

Samvid

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David

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

243 words

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