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Write a letter to your manager to report a mistake you found in a magazine article about your company In your letter • Describe the magazine and the article. • What was the mistake? • Explain what you would like the manager to do about it.

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Dear Smith, I, Arshdeep Kaur, working as
a
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 HR in your company at headquarter location. On
our
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 monthly
base's
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, we publish some magazines to stay in touch with
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the public
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public
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. In our recent magazine, Frista, we publish
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articles about the company and
investors
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 growth. As we moved our headquarter location from Taxes to California
last
 month. We forgot to update it with our magazine collab company. They print the same address in the recent article, which is creating confusion among the other articles which we send out on
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 routine to stay in touch with clients. I would like to recommend
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that we can make
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as
soom
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 as possible to avoid upcoming mistakes. Your's
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, Arshdeep Kaur
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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