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Thanks to the development of technology, many employers are now offering the employees the option to work from home. Is this a positive or negative development. Give reasons for your answer and give relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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The importance of
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technologies
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 increasing with leaps and bounds. In
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workers the option to
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 from house. In my, opinion the position of the method appears to be more rational. The
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 some magnificent points and few disadvantages. In
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 trend and
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 will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will
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 argument and but, the paramount fact is that one clear example is that during the pandemic, pupils are not able to
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work
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 in the office.
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, due to
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 individuals have choices to
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work
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. Another striking benefit of the regard is that it
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 numerous types of
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of
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 the company
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 of servants or sweepers.
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, workers have more time to spend with their children and it is increasing bonding between
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guardians
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gaurdians
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 and juveniles. Moving
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, it is pertinent to mention that the article published in the eminent newspaper depicts that
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 from home is a unique method which is popular after the
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, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of
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 trend. Yet, the most alarming one is that it is shrinking our
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ancient
 rituals
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 in the past, the population are
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about
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 the workplace and with coworkers. In comparison, nowadays the situation is
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. Society is not taking interest in
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 and with batchmates.
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, the classic method of jobs which have countless advantages
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 it is enhancing behaviour, mindset, and, creativity. Yet, owing to
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 of
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 workers avoid these kinds of skills.
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, when we
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, we learn leadership, time management, and, patience. In spite
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, we forget these kinds of aspects.
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, the survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford in London revealed that
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is adequate for the employee.
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, it is not good for society. Because the employees should never learn things
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home rather than in the office. According to
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 aforementioned above, one can reach the
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, that the perks of technique
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 instrumental indeed.
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Nevertheless
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 its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either. I strongly believe that the use of
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 superior. But it is
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 decreasing our cultural and traditional values.

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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