You are watching television and saw a program being shown early in the morning that contained a lot of violence. You believe the program is unsuitable for that time of day. Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter :- Give reason for writing. Explain what you think the problem is with the program. Say what you would like the station manager to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to concern about your daily

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in the morning.

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show included many crime and

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of all, I have two boys and they are 6 and 8 ages. Every morning, they wake up

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. My family

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name is Black Cat. Some mornings I wake up together with my child and I do not allow

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the program time. In fact, if it is possible that you can show

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new Black Cat

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letter and solving my family problem. Yours faithfully, Orhan Veli Çanakçı

orhanveli2006Thu Jan 12 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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175 words

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