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some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. other believe that they should only allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give tou own opinion.

#people #university #students #study #subjects #future #science #technology #tou
I am writing
this
 letter to express my displeasure about the recent
paint
work
 done by your team in my house,
last
 week. As I informed you earlier, I would not be able to inspect the
work
 while it was going
due
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 to my other personal
committments
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commitments
 I have. Yesterday, I got the chance to inspect the
work
 finished. There are two areas where rework is needed.
Firstly
, in the backyard, the
paint
 on the pots is a
mixure
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mixture
 of various colours and no pattern designed on them.
Secondly
, the
paint
 on the walls of
drawing
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the drawing
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 room is very rough and patchy. As per our mutual agreement, the walls of
drawing
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the drawing
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 room must be pressure washed before applying the
paint
. It seems
this
 was not followed by your team. Apart
these
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 mentioned issues, I am satisfied with your overall
work
, especially the flower designs on the ceiling of
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the master's
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master's
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 bedroom, vivid and attractive. I request you plan for rework and finish it within a week. The
last
 tranche of the payment will be released only after the
afore-mentioned
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 tasks are finished. I solicit your
co-orperation
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cooperation
 in finishing the pending tasks at the earliest.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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