Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university

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It is hard to deny that the college should provide some knowledge for the courses.
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and facilities and should be examined meticulously. As far as culture and environment are concerned, I strongly hold that
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relative information and skill in the workplace.
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and foremost, the culture
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through thousands of years, which contains lots of events and examples that we could follow and study. To be more specific,
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the future.
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environment is very realistic indicates that without preparing some ability foundation you will be very hard to work on unfamiliar jobs. Take the case of the
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new colleagues.
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, learning the articles and skills needed in the companies is very important to avoid plenty of
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future tasks should be the main
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Lifelong learning
  • Holistic development
  • Vocational training
  • Industry-specific competencies
  • Critical thinking
  • Creative problem-solving
  • Academic research
  • Intellectual development
  • Ethics and values
  • Societal contribution
  • Job market demands
  • Practical training
  • Internships
  • Knowledge advancement
  • Global challenges
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