Some people think employers should not care about the way their employees dress, but the quality of work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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clients
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the clients
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t-shirt
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employees
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a post
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clients
. Because there are many cameras and security boxes to drop off the parcels, both Use synonyms
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the
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efforts
caused by wearing Fix the agreement mistake
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on
uncomfortable clothes.
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work
. It should be guaranteed that Change the verb form
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comfortably
in their workplace. But there is a limit. It cannot be accepted that Change the word
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while
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meet
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