Some people think employers should not care about the way their employees dress, but the quality of work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals insist that they should be allowed to wear what they want comfortably when they
work
, saying it will increase their work
efficiency. In contrast
, there are some people who don't
agree with the statement, saying that dressing up is also
a part of work
.
In my opinion, it should be up to what kind of jobs the employees
have. For example
, if one needs to meet their clients
face
to face
, it's unavoidable for them to wear proper clothings
. None of Change the wording
clothing
items of clothing
articles of clothing
clients
will welcome a bank Add an article
the clients
officer
with t-shirt
and jeans. It will make the client think that the bank Correct article usage
a t-shirt
officer
isn't
serious with their job and they don't
want to work
considerably. This
situation will impact the business of the company. Hence
, it's an understandable case where the
employers care Correct article usage
apply
their
Change preposition
about their
employees
dress.
Change to a genitive case
employee's
employees'
However
, there are also
work
fields where dressing up at workplace
isn'Correct article usage
the workplace
t
as important. I can give an example of post
Correct article usage
a post
officer
. Nowadays in Korea, it's being less and less common to deliver a parcel face
to face
to their clients
. Because there are many cameras and security boxes to drop off the parcels, both clients
and post officers prefer the
contactless delivery. In Correct article usage
apply
this
situation, it doesn't
matter whether the post officer
wears nicely
or not. It's more important that he feels comfortable with his clothes so that he can Change the word
nice
work
without unnecessary efforts
caused by wearing Fix the agreement mistake
effort
on
uncomfortable clothes.
In conclusion, there can'Change preposition
apply
t
be only one answer to this
statement. It depends on where the person work
. It should be guaranteed that Change the verb form
works
employees
wear comfortably
in their workplace. But there is a limit. It cannot be accepted that Change the word
comfortable
employees
wear as they want while
they need to Correct word choice
when
mee
their Correct your spelling
meet
clients
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