With a fast pace of modern life more and more people are dependent on fast foods as their main meals. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, time runs so quickly and society looks for the easiest way to have meals.
Junk
foods become more and more popular all over the world, even in rural areas you can see junk
food
restaurants there. In my opinion, consuming junk
food
in our daily life will lead people
to a serious problem for several reasons I will discuss in this
essay.
First
of all, eating junk
food
will always affect people
's health. The research shows that obesity and blood diseases become at the highest level in countries depending on these restaurants. people
become healthier as much as stopping eating fast food
. this
is clear and obvious for people
who stop eating this
dangerous male. Ministries of health in advanced countries pay attention to these dilemmas and they put a lot of plans to educate people
on the hardness of junk
males .
On the other hand
,Junk
food
stops people
particularly young people
from moving and practising sports. These food
prevent people
from thinking in normal ways. it affects cells in the brain and they become addicted to the same routine every day.That also
causes a lot of psychological diseases such
as depression and autism. families who paper their food
in their homes are far away from those problems.
To sum up, a lot of scientists and doctors claim that if people
want to live longer and healthier they should minimize eating junk
food
as much as possible,However
these meals addictions become bigger and fast than we can imagine.Add a comma
,However
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite