Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

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that the students at primary school must be taught creative

subjects

such

as painting, music, and acting along with English, mathematics, and social science.

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the above nation, and it will

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discuss how art-related

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help

children

choose their stream and why other

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are

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essential for them. Students should not be confined to

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only basic

subjects

as it hampers their development phase.

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is the time when they can participate in art-based

subjects

,

such

as singing, dancing, and painting, which may help them in choosing the

subjects

of their choice at the secondary level. If a child is not interested in theoretical

subjects

, he must have other options to choose from. An article published in "The Times" stated that 80 out of 100 schools in the UK have added music and drama

subjects

to their curriculums in order to create to the interests of

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Are English and social science worthless

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small

children

? No, every

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is essential for the overall as well as

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cognitive

development of

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children

. They need to be thought

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such

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and subtraction in order to buy anything from the school's canteens or any random shop. Equally, basic communication skills are

also

required to socialize with others.

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these

subjects

will help them to experience a

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diverse

variety of options in their

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curriculum. For intense

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old need basic communication skills to have his/her own social circle.

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, various options can prove to be regarding for

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students In conclusion, every subject is important for primary school

children

, but if they do not get an opportunity for hands-on experience in various

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, their interest would diminish and they would not know their subject of choice