You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Give details of your study plans Explain why you want to get a part-time job Suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Sam, I hope you're doing well. So tell me how is your
job
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? I'd like to see you because long time not seen you. As you know,
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year I applied for a Business management master's degree at Guilford university. So
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my dream came true and
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month I got a Canadian student visa. So my course will start on February 10th of 2023 and before starting date I have to move over there.
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, I need some favour from you because you're the only person I know who lived in Canada.
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, I have to find a part-time
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as soon as possible. Because I know the
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couple
months
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of living in an unknown country is too hard for any
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lives
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. Because I need a
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to cover my accommodation fees and food expenses.
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, I know you are employer needs more part-time workers to do the night shift. Because I saw one advertisement published on the internet. So I think you are the right person who can help me because you have been working over there for more than ten years. please try to help me to find that
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. That's all from me. I looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Devid.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Educational aspirations
  • Work experience
  • Financial independence
  • Resume (or CV)
  • Local job market
  • International student
  • Legal requirements
  • Student work permit
  • Employment trends
  • Time management
  • Networking
  • A part-time position
  • Balance studies and work
  • Job hunting strategies
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