Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like . Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future , such as those related to science and technology . Discuss this views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that

students

should choose a major and

study

what they really like while others clearly say that they should

study

useful subjects

such

as science and technology and things that

related

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to

this

. It

is obviously believe

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that choosing

favourite

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major in university has always been an important issue for many

students

. Selecting and studying in your own major can bring benefits and advantages for you and your future.

Students

have a great chance to

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to their future goals,

although

they attain their ambitions and

and

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make

a

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good planning attentively for their life.They don’t

wast

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their time on other use

less

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subjects . Absolutely they can progress faster in their studies and comprehend lessons more deeply.

On the other

hand

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some people argue that they should only

study

useful lessons that they really need in the future like science and technology.They believe It can be more helpful and worthwhile for them

instead

of working on their own interests .

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if something like that happens to

students

they don't have a chance for focusing on their

favorite

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fields . They just

study

advantageous things without any

interests

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. They lost the chance for devoting their own opinions during their education.

Although

they

getting

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confused

for

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life’s priorities. In conclusion, In my view following pleasure and your own major is momentous for everyone . One of its consequences

are

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in your learning and your

futures

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future

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job . Everybody needs

having

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a career move with love and it

is absolutely depends

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on your education.