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Nowadays, many families move overseas for job opportunities and take their children along with them. Some people think that this is beneficial for children's of the family while other thing children will find it difficult discuss both of youse and give your opinion.

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Migration is increasing at
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tremendous rate. some
individual
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 think that
this
 is beneficial to take
children
 along with them while migrating. While others hold the opinion that it
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 a lot of problems
to
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 their
kids
.
This
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ideas. I am in favour of the former view.
Tracelling
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Travelling
 of parents along with their
children
 has a wide number of advantages.
Firstly
, moving
into
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 different countries provides a lot and better
opportunity
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opportunities
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to
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 parents. Along with
this
, they can provide their
kids
,
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 educational facilities, and luxurious life.
Secondly
,
kids
 can make a lot of friends from different countries .
For instance
, get studying in Canada,
are
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 exploring more than that
of
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in India. Some individuals hold
a
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different
perspective
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perspectives
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.
this
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 of all, moving into a new country is
really
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 big challenge. It is really hard for the
kids
 to indulge
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new
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a new
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 environment. They have to face problems related to language.
Moreover
, it is really difficult to start life at a new point. I postulate that it is a positive point for the
children
 that they got the opportunity to move along with
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 guardians. One generation always
have
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 to struggle for the future ones. To exemplify, most students travel to other countries in order to get a better future, and because of that, they have to face all the problems alone.
Finally
, it can help
the
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children
 to explore
world
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 and people better than others. To conclude, they are both advantages and disadvantages for
children
 who go overseas with their parents. I reiterate that the pros are more than
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of
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cons.
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