Nowadays, many families move overseas for job opportunities and take their children along with them. Some people think that this is beneficial for children's of the family while other thing children will find it difficult discuss both of youse and give your opinion.

Migration is increasing at

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tremendous rate. some

individual

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individuals

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think that

this

is beneficial to take

children

along with them while migrating. While others hold the opinion that it

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a lot of problems

to

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their

kids

.

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essay will illustrate both

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ideas. I am in favour of the former view.

Tracelling

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Travelling

of parents along with their

children

has a wide number of advantages.

Firstly

, moving

into

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different countries provides a lot and better

opportunity

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opportunities

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to

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parents. Along with

this

, they can provide their

kids

,

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educational facilities, and luxurious life.

Secondly

,

kids

can make a lot of friends from different countries .

For instance

, get studying in Canada,

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exploring more than that

of

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in India. Some individuals hold

a

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different

perspective

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perspectives

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.

this

message will illustrate some ideas to support the other opinion not

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of all, moving into a new country is

really

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big challenge. It is really hard for the

kids

to indulge

into

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new

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environment. They have to face problems related to language.

Moreover

, it is really difficult to start life at a new point. I postulate that it is a positive point for the

children

that they got the opportunity to move along with

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guardians. One generation always

have

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to struggle for the future ones. To exemplify, most students travel to other countries in order to get a better future, and because of that, they have to face all the problems alone.

Finally

, it can help

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children

to explore

world

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and people better than others. To conclude, they are both advantages and disadvantages for

children

who go overseas with their parents. I reiterate that the pros are more than

that

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of

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cons.