You recently ordered an item of clothing through a store’s website. When you received it, you discovered that it was not the same item you had ordered. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, Describe the item you ordered Explain what was wrong with the item you received Say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Manager,
I am writing regarding a skirt I ordered on your website. I received the item on Wednesday
last
week and noticed that it was different from the product
I had ordered.
I had
ordered a dusty pink pleated skirt of size xs on your website. It is made of polyester and runs to the ankle. I Unnecessary verb
apply
however
received a
wrong Correct article usage
the
product
. The product
that you have sent is a navy blue pleated skirt of size M. The product
is of a different color
and size from what I Change the spelling
colour
have
ordered though it appears to be the same design.
The Unnecessary verb
apply
product
is too large and I will not be able to wear it. I intended to wear it for a party next
week. It will however
be too late to ship the right product
. I would like to request a refund for the item I have ordered.
I look forward to a favourable response.
Yours sincerely,
JaneSubmitted by abhinayam on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite