You want to sell your laptop. You think a friend of yours might like to to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are selling the laptop Discribe the laptop Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it

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Dear Joy Hope you are doing well. I'm just writing to you to

know

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find out

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about your interest

to buy

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in buying

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laptop

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. I have joined the for a masters degree at the University of Ulster, and my class will going to start

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apply

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next week. I am so excited to study again at the same university we studied at. I have to secure some money for fees and study expenses, and for ,that I am planning to sell my

laptop

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, which I recently purchased. My

laptop

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is a Mac Book Pro with an M1 chip, 500 GB hard disk, and retina display, which I purchased

the

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apply

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last

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February. The extended warranty will only expire in March next year. The original colour of the

laptop

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is grey but I have done a blue colour sticker on the outside which you can remove if you don't want. I am available

this

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week so just stop by my home when you have time. just ring me before you start, let's have a coffee together. With love, Jennifer

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task response

Provide a clear and direct response to the task prompt about selling the laptop.

coherence cohesion

Improve the logical structure for better flow and organization of ideas. Revise the greeting and closing to be more formal and appropriate for a letter to a friend. Ensure each paragraph presents a single, clear idea.

task achievement

Ensure that the information is relevant and well-developed. Use a more suitable writing tone for a formal letter. Maintain consistent formality in language and tone throughout the letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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The Closing

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