You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In you letter explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his help in arranging it

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Dear manager, I am your employee for 3 years in your Korea office branch and I am writing

this

letter to draw your attention towards an important issue which I am facing nowadays. Sir,

last

year, I felt that I must study

further

to improve my post for that reason I applied for a master's degree in the United States and fortunately, I got a Scholarship from there. Now, I have to join my master classes over there only for six months as the rest of the course will be delivered online.

Therefore

, I have arranged one of my most competent colleagues for

this

period on my behalf. As your office head branch is in the USA so, I will be in touch for my part-time job with it. I was wondering if you could assist me in arranging my tickets by giving me 2-month pay in advance. Yours sincerely, Sana Ghani.

Submitted by drsanaghani on Sun Jan 15 2023

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7 paragraphs

152 words

8.50

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professional advancement
cross-cultural collaboration
headquarters/ head office
global perspective
remote work
temporary assignment
team dynamics
networking opportunities
cultural immersion
succession planning
collaborative tools
time zone coordination
corporate hierarchy
relocation logistics
work-life balance
multinational environment

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