You recently spent a night in a hotel and had to put up with a great deal of noise very early in the morning because of a faulty central heating system. The manager promised to contact you regarding compensation but you still haven't heard from him. Write a letter to the hotel. In the letter • describe the problem at the hotel • explain what the manager had said at the time •say what you want the manager to do.

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Respected Sir, I am an international student of the Computer Science department at your esteemed institution, majoring in Artificial Intelligence. I wanted to seek approval for leaves of 7 days from 25th May to 31 May 2022, to meet my grandmother in Punjab. Currently, I am pursuing the 6th semester and enrolled in a Machine Learning project undertaken by the class which is due

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month. Considering my responsibilities, I did the early submission of my research work to the in charge and discussed my leave plans with her. Sir, I need to visit my ailing grandmother, who is now 92 years of age and recently suffered from a heart stroke. My hometown is far from our college and my two days will be consumed by travelling only. I wanted to spend some time with her as she had taken very good care of me during my childhood.

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, I would request you to please grant me leave for a week.

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, in charge informed me that I need your approval for the final acceptance of my project work. I will be looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Rubina Gill

msrubinagillSun Jan 15 2023

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task response

Specify the problematic incidence experienced at the hotel rather than discussing leave approval.

coherence and cohesion

Rewrite the greeting and closing parts more formally and address the hotel instead of mentioning an institution.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

193 words

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