Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over the method to cope with offenders. While some claim that putting

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behind the bars is not the optimal way to address them, the opposite makes a statement that schooling and

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training

are better means

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to support them. While the former is valid to some extent,

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consider myself a proponent of the latter. Without a shadow of a doubt, keeping

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in captivity is not the best way of dealing with them. Depending on the severity of the crime, the government should consider how to deal with them appropriately.

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for misdemeanors

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as graffiti on the wall, shoplifting or pickpocketing, the authority had better regard as a fine. With respect to felonies

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as murdering or causing serious loss of property and life should send the lawbreakers to jail to make

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society

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safer and avoid them

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, it is not the optimal tactic to cope with

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. While the ineffectiveness of keeping

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contained is widely acknowledged, there is a wealth of means to address

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education and

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training. While schooling offers

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awareness of their past mistakes,

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orientation will help them make ends meet. By doing so, they will have the opportunity to reintegrate into the community and reduce the rate of reoffending.

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there are a bunch of reformatories founded for

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juvenile crimes

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awareness and

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future

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in the handicraft or sewing industry.

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, providing an education system and

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training is one of the most effective methods to bend the perpetrators. In conclusion,

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imprisoning offenders

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suitable for

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certain kinds of

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, it is not the best effectiveness to apply on a mass scale.

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opportunities

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more appropriately efficient to cope with the

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