In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common . Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move out of cities to rural areas. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there is a large

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population in cities and the regimes motivate both the city

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and businesses to shift to the rural

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for the sake of

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environmental

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. Personally, I think that there are major drawbacks of

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in living standard ,economy and many more, while there is only one advantage to

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that it

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free from pollution . To Commence with, the disadvantages of shifting toward rural

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.

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of all, the living standard of city

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might get lower when they start to live in

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. It means that there is a lack of medical care , education and employment opportunities in rural

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which badly

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the lifestyle of rural

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.

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, recent studies show that more rural

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are illiterate nowadays because of

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of schools in their

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, there is a limit on the growth of businesses when they move

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village locations.

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, there are frequent transport facilities and

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people

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in towns which helps to proliferate various companies, whereas growth of the businesses disrupt in the rural

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because of

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of sources of supplies . For illustration,

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idea in

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because of attracting only a few

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number

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of rural

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.

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, these two things are badly impacted by

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of individuals from cities to

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, the only positive side of

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trend is that

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rid

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the drastic issue of pollution. By moving toward countryside

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, there is a less

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of

people

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in cities which results in the lesser use of personal automobiles and

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the

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level of carbon dioxide emissions in

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which

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contributes toward a clear and clean nature. As a consequence, the

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of health issues is reduced in towns .

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, the moving of

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contribute

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a positive role to their surrounding

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. In conclusion, higher authorities

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to reduce the pollution in

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through

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encouraging

people

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for shifting

in

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villages

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but, I believe that the drawback outweigh an advantage because it is negatively impacted the living standard of

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and the growth of city industries.