Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the impacts an individual can make to save the environment are nothing compared to that done by huge enterprises and governments. I agree with the notion given
as
subjects with massive scales can play a huge role in anything, particularly in nature.
Correct word choice
that
To begin
with, large industries can take a part in being aware of their own production waste. The majority of issue we have today is regarding pollutants created by the manufacturing process. Linking Words
For instance
, farming companies concentrating on dairy products from cows are known to be responsible for contributing to almost half of the greenhouse effect gases. The cows' excretion produces carbon dioxide gases which Linking Words
then
if they are released into the air and reach the atmosphere, can destroy ozone layers and create the effect. They can put Linking Words
this
to an end by proceeding these the poo immediately so that it will not have a chance Linking Words
in
having direct contact with the air.
Change preposition
of
However
, in reality, there are always those who are irresponsible about the environment and are only oriented to profit. Linking Words
Hence
, governments should be there to take control of Linking Words
this
problem. Linking Words
For example
, the government can impose a serious fine on all enterprises if, during the production process, the pollutants made do not undergo a filtering process before they are thrown away into the river. On a smaller scale, the authority can Linking Words
also
make a regulation for people, in general, to start parting their waste into categories Linking Words
such
that the litter can be processed more effectively and efficiently.
In essence, the environmental problem is complex, so it is nearly impossible to be solved by society as individuals. Linking Words
This
issue should be tackled by big companies and governments as their Linking Words
scopes
Fix the agreement mistake
scope
are
broader in general. The former can play a part in managing their wasteful products, and the latter has the privilege to make laws regarding waste.Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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