Some people think that it is best to save money, for example in a bank or savings scheme. Other people feel that money should be spent whenever it is available. Discuss these views and reach an opinion on this debate.
The scheme of allocating
money
is Use synonyms
hotly-debated
topic in our life. Several societies have Add an article
a hotly-debated
notion
that keeping the Add an article
the notion
a notion
budget
in a Use synonyms
bank
is Use synonyms
beneficial
preference, meanwhile, Add an article
a beneficial
the beneficial
the
others say that we should use it when it Correct article usage
apply
is exist
in our wallet. Change the verb form
exists
This
essay shall elucidate those paradigms and peddle up the reason why the Linking Words
first
contention is more valuable than the Linking Words
last
option.
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To begin
with, we will gain numerous benefits when our Linking Words
money
is kept in a Use synonyms
bank
. To exemplify, our Use synonyms
money
will be saved in exceptional protection because banks have good security Use synonyms
system
like protection Fix the agreement mistake
systems
personnels
, the steel branch, etc. Correct your spelling
personnel
Consequently
, we shall keep away from the risks, namely our Linking Words
budget
will be stolen or the disaster which will corrode it. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, there are profits from Linking Words
the
every annual period because the Remove the article
apply
money
in our account will be exerted Use synonyms
for
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on
the
Correct article usage
apply
economy
activities. As an output, the banking institution will distribute Replace the word
economic
us
the extra profit, due to the fact we have given Correct pronoun usage
apply
trustness
.
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trusted
trusts
Nevertheless
, using our Linking Words
budget
when it Use synonyms
is exist
has some positive points. Change the verb form
exists
For example
, when my Linking Words
favorite
singer announces that he will do Change the spelling
favourite
concert
, I should spend my Add an article
a concert
the concert
money
Use synonyms
for
the tickets. Change preposition
on
As a result
, the happiness feeling from dopamine will increase because my desires have been accommodated. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
the
exerting Correct article usage
apply
money
whenever it is available makes us learn how to distribute the allocation cost for the priority business, that being the case, we might apply the art of Use synonyms
the
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apply
money
management.
In conclusion, keeping Use synonyms
money
Use synonyms
to
the Change preposition
in
bank
is a better determination than Use synonyms
fill
our interests when we have coins in our pocket. Wrong verb form
filling
Although
, we shall achieve happiness and Linking Words
the
financial management from the Correct article usage
apply
second
perspective, Linking Words
however
, saving Linking Words
money
might obliterate negative potencies Use synonyms
such
as catastrophe which shall destruct our Linking Words
budget
or a thief who wants to steal it. Use synonyms
Then
, we are able to acquire the profit from the Linking Words
bank
.Use synonyms
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