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Directors of large companies often receive much bigger salary increases than ordinary workers. Employers' organizations say that in a global market this is necessary to attract the best management talent. What are your views? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

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In today’s society, large ventures offer
a better salaries
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 to
directors
 than normal
workers
 because
this
 is one of the ways to attract talented people around the world. In my opinion, I totally
agree
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 the statement for the following reasons.
To begin
 with,
directors
 often have higher qualifications than ordinary
workers
.
For instance
, a company will often set a higher requirement for whom that willing to take the responsibilities to become a director.
In contrast
, normal
workers
 typically have basic requirements
such
 as
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present
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the
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 certificate of graduation from high school to enter the firms.
Besides
, the risk taken by
directors
 is way higher than
workers
.
Directors
 often need to have a variety of
skills
such
 as interpersonal
skills
, management
skills
, and communication
skills
. To
further
 illustrate,
directors
 often have to plan and managed the project carefully as the failure of
project
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the project
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 might lead them to be unemploy. Henceforth, when the project is well managed at the end of the period,
directors
 receive bigger salary increases as they take a higher risk than office
workers
.
Furthermore
, large businesses often provide attractive work benefits to the talents.
This
 is due to the fact that a good management company is often to become successful businesses in the world.
For example
,
the
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 company with
good
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 organization often have clear action plans and ambitious strategy to achieve.
The working
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 incentive programs, profit share to
directors
, and attendance bonuses are some of the working benefits that organizations offer to attract excellent
directors
.
Moreover
,
directors
 have larger responsibilities as compared to normal
workers
,
directors
 often have more tasks to complete and more objectives to achieve. In conclusion, there are various
of
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reasons why I agree
directors
 have
a
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higher pay and increases in their salaries, all of which I think are reasonable and acceptable.
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