Directors of large companies often receive much bigger salary increases than ordinary workers. Employers' organizations say that in a global market this is necessary to attract the best management talent. What are your views? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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than normal

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because

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is one of the ways to attract talented people around the world. In my opinion, I totally

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the statement for the following reasons.

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with,

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often have higher qualifications than ordinary

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, a company will often set a higher requirement for whom that willing to take the responsibilities to become a director.

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, normal

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typically have basic requirements

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certificate of graduation from high school to enter the firms.

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, the risk taken by

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is way higher than

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Directors

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often need to have a variety of

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as interpersonal

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, management

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, and communication

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illustrate,

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often have to plan and managed the project carefully as the failure of

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the project

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might lead them to be unemploy. Henceforth, when the project is well managed at the end of the period,

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receive bigger salary increases as they take a higher risk than office

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, large businesses often provide attractive work benefits to the talents.

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is due to the fact that a good management company is often to become successful businesses in the world.

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company with

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organization often have clear action plans and ambitious strategy to achieve.

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incentive programs, profit share to

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, and attendance bonuses are some of the working benefits that organizations offer to attract excellent

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,

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have larger responsibilities as compared to normal

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,

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often have more tasks to complete and more objectives to achieve. In conclusion, there are various

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reasons why I agree

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higher pay and increases in their salaries, all of which I think are reasonable and acceptable.