Directors of large companies often receive much bigger salary increases than ordinary workers. Employers' organizations say that in a global market this is necessary to attract the best management talent. What are your views? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

In today’s society, large ventures offer

a better salaries

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to

directors

than normal

workers

because

this

is one of the ways to attract talented people around the world. In my opinion, I totally

agree

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the statement for the following reasons.

To begin

with,

directors

often have higher qualifications than ordinary

workers

.

For instance

, a company will often set a higher requirement for whom that willing to take the responsibilities to become a director.

In contrast

, normal

workers

typically have basic requirements

such

as

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present

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the

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certificate of graduation from high school to enter the firms.

Besides

, the risk taken by

directors

is way higher than

workers

.

Directors

often need to have a variety of

skills

such

as interpersonal

skills

, management

skills

, and communication

skills

. To

further

illustrate,

directors

often have to plan and managed the project carefully as the failure of

project

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the project

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might lead them to be unemploy. Henceforth, when the project is well managed at the end of the period,

directors

receive bigger salary increases as they take a higher risk than office

workers

.

Furthermore

, large businesses often provide attractive work benefits to the talents.

This

is due to the fact that a good management company is often to become successful businesses in the world.

For example

,

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company with

good

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the good

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organization often have clear action plans and ambitious strategy to achieve.

The working

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incentive programs, profit share to

directors

, and attendance bonuses are some of the working benefits that organizations offer to attract excellent

directors

.

Moreover

,

directors

have larger responsibilities as compared to normal

workers

,

directors

often have more tasks to complete and more objectives to achieve. In conclusion, there are various

of

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reasons why I agree

directors

have

a

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higher pay and increases in their salaries, all of which I think are reasonable and acceptable.