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Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table provides information about
China
,
India
 and
USA
 which are
three
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the three
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countries
 with the highest populations. Overall,
populations
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the populations
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 of
three
countries
 have grown since 2017.
China
 is listed
on
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as
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 the most populated country of
three
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the three
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countries
. While
USA
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the USA
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 is
on
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in
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the
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apply
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last
 place among
three
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the three
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countries
. Since 2017,
number
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the number
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 of human
being
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beings
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 have increased below
than
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apply
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one
percent
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per cent
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 except for
India
which its
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whose
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 figure is 1.11
percent
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per cent
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. Not only
India
 has increased the most, but
also
 it has the most outstanding figure
of
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for
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 density which is over 400.
On the other hand
,
China
 and
USA
 represent 15 and 36 respectively. But when it comes to land area and urban population.
India
 is
on
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in
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the
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apply
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last
 place, representing the number of 2973 million for land size and 32
percentage
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per cent
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 for the portion of people in
city
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the city
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.
China
 has the biggest country size which is 9388 million while
USA
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the USA
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 has the most people in
city
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the city
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, accounting for over 80
percent
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per cent
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.
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