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A tax haven is a place with extremely low tax rates. The rationale is that rich people and businesses can choose where to pay tax, so they are attracted to places with the lowest tax rates. As a result, the tax havens receive tax income that would otherwise go to other countries. Tax havens are good for both taxpayers and for the people of the tax havens. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some countries provide lower
tax
 rates to attract investors and wealthy people. It appears that these
tax
 havens have a positive impact on both taxpayers and citizens of the
country
 for many reasons which are stated below. States need funds for various development projects
such
 as; infrastructure, health, education, etc, and their main sources of funds mainly come from their exports sector and the revenue of taxes.
However
, it seems that many nations are facing difficulties to manage their economical status and as
the
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 they provide opportunities for investors to invest in their region with a lower
tax
 rate which benefits both parties. As a ,result the economy of a
country
 will grow while improving the quality of life of the citizen.
Furthermore
, businesses
such
 as startup companies can gain a bigger profit by paying a lower rate of
tax
 which will allow them to expand their business.
This
 will attract foreign investors and allow them to gain a better return on investment.
On the other hand
, the government can use the money to continue their development projects and create a better city for people.
However
,
this
 will lead to creating a happy and productive nation.
In addition
, it will be the best mode to increase their foreign reserves and import the necessities and manage the rising living cost and improve social welfare schemes.
In contrast
, people think that
tax
 havens will affect the economy of other countries where they will lose their income.
However
, creating a
tax
 haven is a decision of a
country
 where it leads a specific
country
 to clear economic growth.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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