Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays a lot of
people
believe that students
should have freedom
in choosing university
subjects
that they are interested in while other part
of Change the wording
parts
people
disagree
with Change the verb form
disagrees
this
point of view and think that students
ought to be involved only in studying those subjects
which are related to their future major.
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the 21’st
21’st
century there is a tendency among Correct your spelling
21st
students
to choose the major that resonates with their heartbeat. To illustrate that, my niece Sholpan was absolutely interested in aviation from her childhood. Then
when she became a student where she had an opportunity to be admitted to extracurricular classes in
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at
university
and she had the freedom
to study the subjects
that interested her and mainly she chose those, which were helpful in being an air traffic controller, such
as meteorology, aerodynamics and navigation. Thus
, her dream came true and she could easily join Aviation High School in Riga and became an air traffic controller of KazAeroNavigation JSC. Studying from passion is more effective in most of
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the
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On the other hand
, many people
feel that students
should join classes which are related to technology
and science only without any choice, such
as natural science and technology
, information technology
etc. and they should focus on studying these subjects
. Countrymen believe that in times of high technology
and competition, countries must have highly qualified scientists and technologists, and if young people
will mostly pay attention to arts and humanitarian subjects
, the country will not have competitive
economy. Add an article
a competitive
For instance
, today young people
think that there Add a missing verb
is no
no
need to study any exact Add a missing verb
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an
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freedom
to pick subjects
for the
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university
students
is not a good idea as well and I agree with this
. In my opinion, there should be straight
correlation between the demands of the country’s jobs market and the Add an article
a straight
subjects
that are needed to be taught in universities.
To conclude, a
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freedom
while picking subjects
in university
is very helpful for the overall development and knowledge enhancement of students
. However
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freedom
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