Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays a lot of
people
believe that
students
should have
freedom
in choosing
university
subjects
that they are interested in while other
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of
people
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with
this
point of view and think that
students
ought to be involved only in studying those
subjects
which are related to their future major. In
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century there is a tendency among
students
to choose the major that resonates with their heartbeat. To illustrate that, my niece Sholpan was absolutely interested in aviation from her childhood.
Then
when she became a student where she had an opportunity to be admitted to extracurricular classes
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university
and she had the
freedom
to study the
subjects
that interested her and mainly she chose those, which were helpful in being an air traffic controller,
such
as meteorology, aerodynamics and navigation.
Thus
, her dream came true and she could easily join Aviation High School in Riga and became an air traffic controller of KazAeroNavigation JSC. Studying from passion is more effective in most
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the
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cases.
On the other hand
, many
people
feel that
students
should join classes which are related to
technology
and science only without any choice,
such
as natural science and
technology
, information
technology
etc. and they should focus on studying these
subjects
. Countrymen believe that in times of high
technology
and competition, countries must have highly qualified scientists and technologists, and if young
people
will mostly pay attention to arts and humanitarian
subjects
, the country will not have
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economy.
For instance
, today young
people
think that there
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no
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need to study any exact
sciences
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Instagram or Tik Tok. So,
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absolute
freedom
to pick
subjects
for
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university
students
is not a good idea as well and I agree with
this
. In my opinion, there should be
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correlation between the demands of the country’s jobs market and the
subjects
that are needed to be taught in universities. To conclude,
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certain
freedom
while picking
subjects
in
university
is very helpful for the overall development and knowledge enhancement of
students
.
However
,
an
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absolute
freedom
can make the outcome worse.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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