You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. Describe the work you have been doing, explain why you can no longer do this work, recommend another person who is interested in the work.

#work #community #manager #organisation #person

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter with regard to the

work

I am currently doing

work

to help society but I cannot continue doing

work

further

. The

work

which comes under my supervision is that I design posters that are to be distributed in nearby areas. Apart from that, I write various types of slogans as well as a few speeches which encourage people to keep their clean, tidy and hygienic as well.

Furthermore

, the major reason behind that I cannot continue

work

because I got a job in another country and all my family members as well as relatives suggest to me that the job is magnificent and numerous people dream of doing 'Computer Engineering' job because it develops a person's brain extremely sharp.

Moreover

, I have one friend who lives adjacent to my home and is very much keen on doing the

work

which I am doing now because he is very brilliant at developing new ideas. Looking forward to a positive and prompt response. Yours faithfully, Shah Harshil

Submitted by harshil31099 on Tue Jan 17 2023

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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6 paragraphs

174 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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