Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.

The

world

today is constantly growing and there seem to be very limited things bringing us all together. Arts,

music

and

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are areas which are actively been observed to attract large groups of people around the

world

. I believe that the

money

the government is investing in improving these

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activities

is not a waste. Art has always been known to tell stories about our past and represent our present.

Therefore

when

such

a powerful weapon is shared among millions of people, it comes to great power.

In addition

to that art brings tourism, which

furthur

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helps in

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the

countries

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economy and

boost

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exchange rates.

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when

national

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exhibition happens on a large level, all the profit through any sale of the art goes to the government

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can

then

use

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to improve public services.

Music

and theatre

also

tend to play a very

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role in tourism and boosting the

countries

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economy. Despite

of

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what the language they might be in , because of its rhythm and style it makes everyone feel aligned to relate and listen to it.

For instance

the biggest boy band in the

world

, BTS contributes to about 80% of South Korea's Economy.

This

is done by bringing in tourism or selling

music

around the

world

. In conclusion, I believe a rightful amount of

money

should be dedicated to Arts,

music

and

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theatre

while keeping in mind that public services need that investment in

money

too. The

money

brought from these

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of

activites

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activity

should be put towards public services

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to improve the

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quality

of life for the people too. If both are done in balance by the government everyone can benefit from

this

greatly.