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some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #university #students #study #subjects #future #science #technology
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Students
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 opt for different types of courses during their time at the university. Some are of the opinion that they should only be taking courses which would help them in their future while others believe in freedom of
subjects
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 selection based on individual's
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. In
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and argue why freedom in selecting
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 is
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 path forward. Universities should allow
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 to select
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 based on their
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interest
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 because
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 is the main driver in pushing the research boundaries of a study subject. If we look at
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 of scientific
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 , we find many instances where researchers, in the past, pushed knowledge boundaries of unrelated
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 and found common
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 points which led to
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development
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 of
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 products. One example is the
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 of
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 product
Macbooks
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. Steve Jobs,
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 cofounder, has mentioned in multiple interviews that it was because of his
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 and knowledge acquired during his university days in calligraphy that led to
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 keyboard design Macbook has today.
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 even though calligraphy does not have any relation to computer
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 , if Steve Jobs had not studied calligraphy , Macbook would not have
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keyboard
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 that it has today. Some are of the view that
students
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 should take
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 related to science and technology because these
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 would give them employment. In today's job markets, there are multiple industries where
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 passed in
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 related to science and technology are needed as these
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 have multiple applications
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from building manufacturing plants for steel to making computer chips. They need engineers with degrees in Mechanical engineering to build and repair machines like steam engines.
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, computer engineers are needed to build software applications.
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, a degree in science and technology
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 would help them in finding jobs quickly. I think that it is extremely important to allow
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 to select
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 of their
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, as
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 motivates research , it allows
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 to advance and explore new fields.
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 ,
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 like humanity help to study human behaviour which teaches society how to deal with difficult human emotions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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