A friend of yours has always admired your car. You have now decided to sell it.

Dear Franklin, I have recently been given a new car as a gift from my father and as you always told me how you appreciated my old Twingo, I’m writing to give you some information that I will sell
this
good and if you are still interested in
this
model it is the opportunity to get it. Most of the vehicles of
this
model as you probably know, are popular in big cities,
such
as here in Dublin, because they can be parked in any available area, as they don’t require much space. Another positive aspect of
this
car is the low consumption of fuel, I use to visit the gas station about once a month even driving every day to the other side of the city.
However
, I must alert you that a mechanical evaluation is required as some parts are not working properly, especially the engine and alarms.
This
matter needs to be considered before achieving
this
relic. When you go to your mother’s house, please come to my house,
this
way I can show you the state of the car, you can drive in the neighbourhood and if you feel inclined to buy it, there is a special offer waiting for you. Looking forward to catching up, Best wishes, Pollyanna
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