Each year, your company gives an Employee of the Year award to a worker who has performed exceptionally well. You believe that someone with whom you work should receive the award this year. Write a letter to your supervisor. In the letter - Describe your colleague’s job at the company - Describe a time you worked with this person - Explain why you believe this person deserves the award
Dear Mr Smith
I am writing
this
letter regarding the Employee of the year event. Moreover
, I know that my other co-workers are also
their suggested person's name and I also
want to participate in this
activity.In addition
, I am suggesting Mrs Brown's name as a candidate for this
important event. Furthermore
, she is currently working as a
head of the accounting department and I am working in Correct article usage
the
this
department from
a year under her supervision.
Change preposition
for
Although
all the workers are giving their best performances for the assigned tasks. But, Mrs Brown is the leader who leads everyone and unites everyone together. Besides
, her aura is so calm and patient, when I started as a trainee in this
company she is the one who trained me and taught me how to work efficiently and effectively without feeling stressed out. I would appreciate it if you could think about my recommendation.
Thank you
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours Sincerely
Sandeep KaurSubmitted by sandeepbhandal12 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite