car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam' How true do you think this statement is? what measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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increase

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ownership

over the past thirty years has become the biggest cause of traffic

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, and it is happening in many cities in the world. In my point of view,

this

statement is very true. I base my opinion on three reasons.

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car

ownership

causes the

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of public transportation greatly decrease year

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year.

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in my city – called

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initially

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the circulation of buses and ‘

angkots

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Angkor

’ was very large, so they could be counted on the fingers right now.

Secondly

, the

increase

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car

ownership

makes

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people

more lazy

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to walk so

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there is a buildup of unnecessary cars on the road, and

this

causes traffic jams.

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increasing

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in

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the

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number of

car

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is air and sound pollution which causes a feeling of fatigue in driving. Meanwhile, the government as a

policy maker

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can take several steps to reduce the use of cars

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the community. The

first

is a scheme to

increase

taxes for

car

owners so that private vehicles can only

owned

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by the rich

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.

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scheme was used by

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and Singapore

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called

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‘The Best Management Vehicles Country in The World’.

Next

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scheme is to improve the services from public transportation and provide cheap prices to

increase

public interest in

tunring

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turning

to public vehicles which can reduce the presence of cars on the road.

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agree that

car

ownership

is

really

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biggest

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cause of traffic

jam

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and it can

be reduce

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by using

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public transportation. .