Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the past, South Korea which is my country tended to prefer

boys

and

girls

schools

, but

gender

equality became more common, came to prefer coeducational

schools

more. I think reasonably, that

boys

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and

girls

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schools

make sense for some

students

and their parents because it gives

students

fundamental freedom. If

students

can study with

students

of same-sex are in

boys

and

girls

schools

,

students

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can study comfortably mind without feeling the psychological discomfort that they have to experience when classing with

students

of

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the opposite-sex

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opposite-sex

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.

In addition

, various activity classes that are considered to be done only for

boys

or

girls

can be enjoyed

comfotably

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comfortably

and freely. Considering

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, I think it

wouid

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would

be helpful to

seperate

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separate

students

into

boys

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boys'

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and

girls

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girls'

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schools

.

On the other hand

,

co-educational

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schools

male and female

students

learn together in the same classroom due to the

gender

equality

education

that is

being actively carried out these days, building a sense of cooperation and being able to live in harmony without discomfort, and you can recognize and understand each other better than when you are with people of the same sex. And

gender

segregation disappears, male and female

students

will see each other as

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colleagues and bona fide competitors regardless of

gender

, giving them the strength to work harder to achieve better grades in various subjects

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So I think coeducational

education

will help eliminate

gender

bias in

students

and build a sense of cooperation and competition. To conclude, I think both of these forms of

education

have great merits. I've been through both

boys

' and

girls

'

schools

and co-educational

schools

, and I think I was really lucky. Overall, I think these two forms of

education

will coexist according to their strengths and outcomes.