Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take an interest in the arts?

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it’s

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value and traditional presence

through

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the

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all nations and a number of

people

are paying more attention to

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modern life and

to build

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their future

career

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.

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essay will discuss the main problems associated with

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issue and provide some possible

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to avoid them. One of the

first

causes of

this

problem is that in the past, factors which made humans

to

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change their perspectives

such

as

internet

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and technologies were not available,

therefore

majority

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of

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individuals

in the past used to express their feelings and expressions on the

papers

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paper

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and sculptures,

however

, nowadays as we are living in

era

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an era

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where the technologies are well advanced, a number of

people

are willing to create

an

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art

in a digital format which does not take much effort.

In addition

to

this

, civilization encouraged

individuals

to turn their interests towards making their future

career

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careers

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by creating a number of opportunities.

For example

, these days, most

people

prefer to create a masterpiece

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the aid of modern technologies as a digital form of

art

.

However

, one very effective solution to deal with

this

complication is to increase

human’s

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interests

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interest

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towards artworks of the ancient lifestyle by exhibiting

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pure examples of fine

arts

since demonstrating how

people

used to express their perspectives in a traditional way helps humans to realize the true importance of artworks.

Furthermore

, the government can

also

help

individuals

to change their interests towards

arts

by compensating money to

art

schools and exhibitions. Taking

US

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as an example, which is one of the most developed countries in the world, the population of the country pay

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less attention to fine

arts

,

however

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the government were able to solve the problem by contributing a large amount of money to

art

schools and academies. In conclusion, in fact, nowadays

individuals

are willing to concentrate to build their future careers and choosing an easy way of living while showing less significant interest

to

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fine

arts

, to solve

this

problem government ought to contribute or the ancient examples of artworks should be exhibited to increase the interest to

arts

.