Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take an interest in the arts?

In our modern life,

Art

is an integral part of all cultures around the world.

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the number of people who

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appreciate

art

and turn their attention to

science

,

technology

and industry is decreasing. In

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. On the one hand,

art

is the area

that is

given the least importance and attention by governments.

Therefore

,

science

lags far behind many other fields,

such

as

technology

or business. More precisely, the main part of the education and economic budget is allocated to

science

,

technology

and business disciplines, so the field of

arts

is gradually losing its recognition among young people.

For example

, people in

science

and

technology

are well paid, while an

arts

student can hardly find a decent institution to do research, let alone scholarships.

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, 

technology

and business are now so advanced that there are many benefits and jobs for

science

students, while artists have to work hard to get placed in any company.

On the other hand

, The government should make some innovations to solve the above problems. One of the

first

steps is to renew

art

and make public collections and develop

this

field.

For example

, the income from the tourism sector can be innovated for the development of

art

,

In addition

, jobs should be created for

art

graduates, because

art

is a talent

that is

needed to preserve the culture of the nation. In conclusion, the number of students focusing on

arts

is decreasing mainly due to the neglect of the government. But it is possible to restore the

arts

and develop the field of education.