Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take an interest in the arts?

In our modern life,

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is an integral part of all cultures around the world.

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the number of people who

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and turn their attention to

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and industry is decreasing. In

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. On the one hand,

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is the area

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given the least importance and attention by governments.

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,

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lags far behind many other fields,

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as

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or business. More precisely, the main part of the education and economic budget is allocated to

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,

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and business disciplines, so the field of

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is gradually losing its recognition among young people.

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, people in

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and

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are well paid, while an

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student can hardly find a decent institution to do research, let alone scholarships.

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and business are now so advanced that there are many benefits and jobs for

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students, while artists have to work hard to get placed in any company.

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, The government should make some innovations to solve the above problems. One of the

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steps is to renew

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and make public collections and develop

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field.

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, the income from the tourism sector can be innovated for the development of

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, jobs should be created for

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graduates, because

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is a talent

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needed to preserve the culture of the nation. In conclusion, the number of students focusing on

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is decreasing mainly due to the neglect of the government. But it is possible to restore the

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and develop the field of education.