People doing dangerous sporting activities likescuba-diving and bungee-jumping should be responsible for their own safety. Rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports. Do you agree ordisagree?
Nowadays, it is most common that would like to play dangerous sporting
people
around the world,
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who
activities
should be responsible for their own safety and rescue
team
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teams
activities
.
In recent times, we can see that most people
across the universe are playing dangerous activities
such
as scuba diving and bungee-jumping
. Correct your spelling
bungee jumping
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, while
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such
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play
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ones as well. Replace the word
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Secondly
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humans, who would cherish Correct article usage
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the
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of
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for
some times
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sometimes
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availability of Correct article usage
the rare
resuce
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rescue
workers
. For instance
, a recent magazine revealed that 40 per cent of people
are rescuing on their own without any experts.
On the other hand
, others will also
ascertain that rescue
workers
should not risk their lives to save people
doing those sports. Indeed, this
is not a best practice for rescue
workers
becasue
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because
team
must protect the Fix the agreement mistake
teams
people
if they struck
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activities
. For instance
, an article published that reasuce
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rescue
reascued
40 individuals who participated in scuba-diving.
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any dangerous games and they must take Change preposition
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rescue
workers
should not risk their lives to save people
doing those sports. They must aid as well.Submitted by ravikrishna045 on
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