People doing dangerous sporting activities likescuba-diving and bungee-jumping should be responsible for their own safety. Rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports. Do you agree ordisagree?

Nowadays, it is most common that
people
around the world
,
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who
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would like to play dangerous sporting
activities
should be responsible for their own safety and
rescue
team
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teams
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should not risk their lives to protect individuals doing those
activities
. In recent times, we can see that most
people
across the universe are playing dangerous
activities
such
as scuba diving and
bungee-jumping
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bungee jumping
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.
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,
while
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playing
such
a notorious games
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will not only
problem
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to
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the humans who
addicted
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to
play
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these sports but
also
make a problem for their
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ones as well.
Secondly
, It is an irrefutable fact that
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humans, who would cherish
to participate
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in scuba diving must be
the
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resposible
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responsible
of
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their own safety
some times
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sometimes
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because of
rare
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the rare
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availability of
resuce
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rescue
workers
.
For instance
, a recent magazine revealed that 40 per cent of
people
are rescuing on their own without any experts.
On the other hand
, others will
also
ascertain that
rescue
workers
should not risk their lives to save
people
doing those sports. Indeed,
this
is not a best practice for
rescue
workers
becasue
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because
the main job of these protection
team
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must protect the
people
if they
struck
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are struck
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with any problems while playing those breathtaking
activities
.
For instance
, an article published that
reasuce
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rescue
team
reascued
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rescued
40 individuals who participated in scuba-diving. To summarize,
people
can involve
playing
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any dangerous games and they must take
their
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responsibility
on
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their own. and I do not agree with the state of
rescue
workers
should not risk their lives to save
people
doing those sports. They must aid as well.
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