People doing dangerous sporting activities likescuba-diving and bungee-jumping should be responsible for their own safety. Rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports. Do you agree ordisagree?
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bungee-jumping
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bungee jumping
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participating
the
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responsible
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some times
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rescue
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, a recent magazine revealed that 40 per cent of Linking Words
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people
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because
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For instance
, an article published that Linking Words
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reduce
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40 individuals who participated in scuba-diving.
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rescued
people
can involve Use synonyms
playing
any dangerous games and they must take Change preposition
in playing
their
responsibility Correct pronoun usage
apply
on
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rescue
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