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Any country should be able to sell goods to other countries without the restrictions of the government. Do you agree or disagree?

#country #goods #countries #restrictions #government
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In an era where most of the
countries
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 in the world believe in democracy and freedom of choice, one can argue that there should not be any restrictions towards the import of goods from the
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's end.
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, in my perspective, considering the interest of the
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 and the people of a particular
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, it is important to be cautious about
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 trading between
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.  While every individual should have the right to sell his products to other
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, the role of
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 intervention in monitoring
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 exports becomes crucial with respect to certain goods.
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, as the governing body of a
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, it is the responsibility of a
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 to have sufficient agricultural products
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 as rice and wheat to satiate the need of the
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. Lack of control over the export of
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 essential commodities may lead to a dearth of
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 resources due to which there could be a famine in the
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. Any
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's economy and welfare are dependent on its people's health. It is imperative that
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 have a strong medical infrastructure to ensure that it is able to address the health issues of the public. In
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 situations, the
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 will have to provide certain restrictions regarding the sale of medicines by private entities to other
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. To summarise, I certainly see a need for
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 policies which regulate the export of essential commodities keeping in mind the well-being of the
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.
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