Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Most people are looking
forwoard
to Correct your spelling
forward
live
the best possible Wrong verb form
living
life
. Although
it is everyone
dream to get Change noun form
everyone's
satisfactory
job and have a high salary, some may face obstacles Add an article
a satisfactory
the satisfactory
prevent
them from achieving their goals. It is argued that Correct pronoun usage
that prevent
if
it is better to stay where you are or to work harder to find better chances. I think the Correct word choice
apply
humen
should always find out how to improve Correct your spelling
human
his
position and not just Correct pronoun usage
their
accepting
Wrong verb form
accept
the
reality without Correct article usage
apply
effort
to change it.
Every individual in Correct article usage
the effort
this
unevirse
has the right to live Correct your spelling
universe
the
Correct article usage
a
life
that makes him feel satisfying
. Replace the word
satisfied
Therefore
, accepting bad
Correct article usage
a bad
jeb
or Change the capitalization
Jeb
job
low
Correct article usage
a low
salary
and Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
live
the whole Wrong verb form
living
life
feeling sad is a really bad idea and it may lead to some complications like depression, shame and It may also
cause the person's
to use drugs or alcohol excessively. Change the noun form
people
person
Moreover
, working in a place that
you don't feel Correct word choice
where
passionated
or motivated in it will decrease your performance and Correct your spelling
passionate
it
might lead to fire the worker from his job.
All of us should seek for Correct pronoun usage
apply
better
Add an article
a better
life
. To be happy you need to be in the position that you like and to
get the salary that you wish. Fix the infinitive
apply
However
, sometimes it is difficult to follow all your plans and results may not satisfy you as you thought but this
is not in your hand what is in your hand is to work harder everyday
and Correct your spelling
every day
i
believe you will improve and you will find Change the capitalization
I
better
place. In my Add an article
a better
opinion
Add a comma
,opinion
life
is not easy you need to push your self
harder to get what you want.
To conclude, chances are not the same for all some people get it in Correct your spelling
yourself
a
easy way and some need to pass through hard times in order to get what they want. In my point of view it is your responsibility to live Change the article
an
good
and happy Add an article
a good
life
so if you feel you are in a bad situation try to change it.Submitted by amar0755.aa on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite