Parents should encourage children to spend a list time in studies and more time in physics activities do you agree ?

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should give information and encouragement to their

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in do outdoor

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and foremost, students who are below 10 years, they do not have

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for what think is good and wrong for them.

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starting age of

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on their

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follow their

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are becoming cause

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if their

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do not encourage them to spend quality

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many constitutions like, like

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on

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mind and

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effect on their nature and

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children

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can be introvert for

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life

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study

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can be not beneficial for any

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children

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for instance

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one

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children

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who only concentrate in

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study

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. So, they cannot able to learn social skills and not able to brief knowledge about the world and other people's nature and it can

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many causes in

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life like

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and could not sufficient to make

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with other

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, not only

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good

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physical body is important for living

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place for the long term causes many

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like obesity and diabetes. And, by doing physical

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can able to live

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with the out any physical issues.

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children

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who doing bought

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and Outer

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cannot only overcome

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stress related

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study

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through some outdoor

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like

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swimming cycling and many other outdoor games.

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,

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childhood

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time

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when

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have

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to do everything and if their

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put pressure on

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offspring for doing only

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cannot live there Sheel hood as well as other

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who spend

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in physical

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with

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oj

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conclusion, I fully support the view that

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should be encouraged by their

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for

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children's

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good body strength and good

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in childhood without any tension of

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