It is believed that learning a new
language
is very necessary for students, but many
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don’t force their students to learn it. Personally, I completely disagree with
this
view.
The
first
reason for
this
is because
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of
people
are successful by getting a degree
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language
.
For example
, if you had an English course, you would have a
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you want.
Besides
,
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a new
language
can help you upgrade yourself a lot, you can talk with foreign
people
to share with them about your area,…
In addition
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benefit above, I think that why some schools don’t force pupils
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a
language
? If a student
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good qualifications of English, that student can take part in some competition and get some prizes for schools. By having some other languages,
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could
be bringChange the verb form
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a lot of advantages for
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and society
such
as commercialization with foreign
people
, travelling
anotherChange preposition
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country to help
people
in that place
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food, water, clothes…when travelling
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places, not only help others but
also
bring themselves lots of knowledge, understand some traditions, cultures,
people
,…of an area, seeing many breathtaking sites like valleys, mountains, rivers,…
In conclusion, I believe that schools should take
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for students to learn
foreignCorrect article usage
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language
, because it
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just benefit about education, but
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