Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

It is believed that learning a new

language

is very necessary for students, but many

school

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don’t force their students to learn it. Personally, I completely disagree with

this

view. The

first

reason for

this

is because

having

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a big

numbers

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of

people

are successful by getting a degree

about

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in

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foreign

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a foreign

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language

.

For example

, if you had an English course, you would have a

change

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chance

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to work at

position

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you want.

Besides

,

learn

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a new

language

can help you upgrade yourself a lot, you can talk with foreign

people

to share with them about your area,…

In addition

the

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benefit above, I think that why some schools don’t force pupils

study

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a

language

? If a student

have

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good qualifications of English, that student can take part in some competition and get some prizes for schools. By having some other languages,

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the pupil

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pupil

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pupils

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could

be bring

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a lot of advantages for

individual

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individuals

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and society

such

as commercialization with foreign

people

, travelling

another

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to another

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country to help

people

in that place

about

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with

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food, water, clothes…when travelling

many

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to many

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places, not only help others but

also

bring themselves lots of knowledge, understand some traditions, cultures,

people

,…of an area, seeing many breathtaking sites like valleys, mountains, rivers,… In conclusion, I believe that schools should take

consideration

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into consideration

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for students to learn

foreign

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a foreign

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language

, because it

not

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is not

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just benefit about education, but

another things

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another thing

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to

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too

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.