Imagine you are writing an email to a friend who you haven’t written to for many years. Write about the most interesting thing you did and what you plan to do next year.

hello dear Idol, how are you I'm so good and excited I came to Australia 2 months ago to build my new hospital and medical school I want to create the best medical Technical
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in Sydney. Now I'm living in a beautiful flat near the sea my
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are very
kindly
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and I hope that all the
Australia
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people be like them one of our
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is
a
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neurosurgery that we have known each other
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four years ago when was in Iran my friend's name is Erica Shake she is really professional in brain surgery if you search her name you will finish you will find her resume brilliant I'm really interested
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our plan and I think we can establish the best medical training
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in Australia
last
week I have met a girl called Aidan so I remember you and you and would you and would to send an email to invite you to join us in our plan we need
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a good optometrist like you in our
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do you like to visit our
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and check it we will be very happy if we have you as a teacher in our training
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so
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email is an invitation to come to Sydney
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weekend I'd love to see you email me some respect
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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