You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Give details of your study plans Explain why you want to get a part-time job Suggest how your friend could help you find a job Please try to write at least 150 words.

Dear Paul, I'm writing to ask for a favour from you to know regarding the availability of part-time jobs in Sydney as you're

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in Sydney for a long time. Let me tell you my study plan in more detail. I'

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been offered a half-paid scholarship to study master's of Civil Engineering by the University of Sydney for the January intake of 2023. I'

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received the subject timetable and according to it, I'll have lectures

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each weekday for 12 weeks from 9.00 am to 4.00 pm.

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, I'll only have weekends to attend else. It clearly points out that's gonna be a hectic schedule for me. Let me explain why I need a part-time job. You know that I'

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been offered a half-paid scholarship and I need to earn and pay the rest of it. I haven't saved that sum of money that I can put up with, and I'm not gonna worry my parents as I wanna be independent as you. So, the best way to settle it'd be

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up part-time jobs on weekends. Since

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you'

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been living for so long and as per the previous conversation

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regarding the number of connections in different jobs you're having, I suppose you might have a big chance of finding me a part-time job. I am willing to do janitorial work, café

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and any other part work as well. Please let me know. Your friend, Jay.