You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Give details of your study plans Explain why you want to get a part-time job Suggest how your friend could help you find a job Please try to write at least 150 words.

Dear Paul, I'm writing to ask for a favour from you to know regarding the availability of part-time jobs in Sydney as you're
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in Sydney for a long time. Let me tell you my study plan in more detail. I'
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been offered a half-paid scholarship to study master's of Civil Engineering by the University of Sydney for the January intake of 2023. I'
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received the subject timetable and according to it, I'll have lectures
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each weekday for 12 weeks from 9.00 am to 4.00 pm.
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, I'll only have weekends to attend else. It clearly points out that's gonna be a hectic schedule for me. Let me explain why I need a part-time job. You know that I'
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been offered a half-paid scholarship and I need to earn and pay the rest of it. I haven't saved that sum of money that I can put up with, and I'm not gonna worry my parents as I wanna be independent as you. So, the best way to settle it'd be
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up part-time jobs on weekends. Since
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you'
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been living for so long and as per the previous conversation
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regarding the number of connections in different jobs you're having, I suppose you might have a big chance of finding me a part-time job. I am willing to do janitorial work, café
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and any other part work as well. Please let me know. Your friend, Jay.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Educational aspirations
  • Work experience
  • Financial independence
  • Resume (or CV)
  • Local job market
  • International student
  • Legal requirements
  • Student work permit
  • Employment trends
  • Time management
  • Networking
  • A part-time position
  • Balance studies and work
  • Job hunting strategies
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