The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The competition for
the
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space
 
exploration
 was mainly between the Russians and the Americans, back in the 
1960's
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. Walking on the
moon
by Neil Armstrong as the
first
person was considered a huge milestone in 
space
 
exploration
, and it is considered one of the most significant achievements that mankind has undoubtedly ever achieved. 
Although
it is said that walking on the
moon
is a step forward for the human race, a question arises regarding the amount of difference made for the common man. In
this
essay, I will discuss the differences it made
on
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people
's lives by walking on the
moon
and marking a significant point 
at
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space
 
exploration
. "
Space
" is
being
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considered 
as
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 a unique and substantial subject, that 
people
 tried to understand since the past. In the past, 
people
 saw how the
moon
looked and
then
had the urge to step on it. Through technological advancement, 
people
built rockets and conquered the need to step on the
moon
. They needed to know 
how
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moon
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is like, and
then
they knew that there is hardly 
that
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moon
contains
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substances that living creatures will grow. But has
this
"walking on the
moon
" achievement benefited 
people
 back on earth?
People
 have not found anything suitable to get back from the
moon
and grow or develop on earth so that it would help mankind to develop. But 
people
in the 
space
 
exploration
 industry only have the mere confidence and satisfaction that they somehow went on to the
moon
, which normal 
people
would not find beneficial for their daily lives. 
However
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 in a holistic manner, common 
people
 would think that as a human race, they have achieved something which is
a
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mental satisfaction. Stepping on the
moon
has
also
 encouraged the 
space
 industry to find out more and go 
further
into deep 
space
 to find other livable planets, hoping to communicate with creatures that live up there and adopt their technologies for our planet. It has
also
 encouraged the 
space
 industry to develop the technology more and provide weather forecast details from satellites, 
such
as tsunamis, tornadoes, and cyclones, to prepare the
people
on earth. So,
this
 encouragement done by stepping on the
moon
can be considered positive in terms of the beneficial factors it provides to 
people
.
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