You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you that I received today an envelope from your bank with my recently arrived card,

however

, the packet was empty. I have been your client for five years since I moved to Canada, and you not only received me well but

also

helped me a lot in opening my account faster.

Although

I am happy with your client service, I must complain regarding

this

situation, which is a lack of security process by you. My main preoccupation about the lost content is that probably someone has intercepted

this

content and possibly he is using my information. I am wondering if

this

card could be unlocked by

this

person and if my money is being spent by him. After describing

this

situation, I would like to receive, as soon as possible, an answer with the process that will be followed to solve, not only the unsafe money situation but

also

a new card. I look forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully, Franklin Vale

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

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Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

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