You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, • Give details of the move • Describe the damage • Say what you would like the manager to do.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
letter with regard to the cargo service you provided
week and it was basically household stuff
as glassware, wooden closets, television, carpets, beds and so on.
, some of the things were damaged during the transport. There are a few things that are broken or cracked.
, a bone-china dinner set is completely damaged due to insufficient packaging.
, the wooden closet glass is cracked too because it may be smashed while loading or unloading the stuff.
, a few clothes
as jackets, trousers and shirts were
stained because oil was
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on them. In order to,resolve the issues I would like you to kindly compensate the damage either by paying the value of the damaged belongings or by paying for the repair because it is the liability of the company to look for any
discrepancies, being a responsible service provider, it is your moral responsibility to resolve the problem. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
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